Konto usunięte: Dear Ms Weatherby,
Further to our recent telephone conversation, I am writing to confirm that I wish to make a reservation in your hotel from 19 to 21 August.
There will be only one person with me. I want to reserve room for two people with breakfast. How much it will be cost? Is it possible to confirm our stay? Could I pay for credit card?(czy mogę płacić kartą kredytową, coś mi nie pasi w tym zdaniu )
I look forward to hearing from you in due course,
Yours sincerely
XXX
1) I would like to
2) Could I pay by credit card?
3) "in due course" według mojej wiedzy jest idiomem, a w formalnych pismach lepiej ich nie używać; zazwyczaj w takich sytuacjach pisze się "as soon as possible" ;-)
/poza tym, na początku piszesz, że chciałabyś potwierdzić rezerwację, a później pytasz, czy jest możliwe potwierdzenie; nieporęcznie to wyszło/

Konto usunięte: Hi Jonh!
How are you? Thanks for your last post. I have great news for you.
You know, I am the Vice-Boss and I have access to some information. So, we are working five days in week-from Monday to Friday. Saturday and Sunday are free. We are starting work at 8 am and finishing at 16 pm. Eight houres, not to much. Of course we have two formal breaks. For breakfast at 10 am and for luch-at 14pm. They last 30 min. If you don't have anything to eat you can buy samething in our canteen. Here we have few tables with chairs, fresh food and excellent coffee! Boss name is Billy. He is sympatic but also demanding. Of course you can talk to us if you would have same problems. You will be working with nice group. Mike, Kate, Sarah and Martin. They will help you. You know, you will be making projects. In this job you will earn a lot of money and you can achieve great referentions. You must remember that sometimes we must stay longer in work. But only if we must finish some important project. I think only this aspect is bad side of this job.
So, I am very happy that we will be working together! Please, rewrite soon.
XXX
1) last letter
2) Saturdays and Sundays
3) 4 p.m. (w "am" też wstaw kropki) /gdy rozróżniasz a.m./p.m. wtedy zapisuj godziny w systemie 12godzinnym/
4) 5) 6) literówki
7) czyje imię - szefa; czyli trzeba użyć dopełniacza: Boss's name
8) literówka
9) you can ask us if you will have any problems / you can ask us if you have any problems (drugiego conditionala nie bardzo możesz użyć :>)
10) references
11) I think it is the one and only negative aspect of this job
Konto usunięte: Hi Tom!
I must make a conference. Con you help me with preparation?
I wish you help me with writing and sending invitations. Can you choose hotel and reserve about 30 rooms for two person each. We need a conference room and computers with access to the Internet. Can you prepare slide-projector and microphones?
I would be very grateful if you help me.
Kim
1) arrange? hold? run? wybierz sobie ;-P
2) I would like you to help
3) znak zapytania w zdaniu "can you choose..." :-P
Tyle, co na szybko.